xanthan gum

i didn't mind the format, i agree with timjim77. otherwise, this was really good and very true to the topic. it actually sort of moved me. just one thing: but ...

though the rhythm and rhyme all worked out, it was not something that internally struck me. i understand the view, which was actually sort of interesting, but the poetic language ...

the train...haunts? alright. besides the slight confusion, i thought this was rather good.

i loved the entire poem. well... okay: great rhyme, not forced at all, and perfect rhythm. the ending was perfect and beautiful and all ZING! (if that makes any sense). ...

I’m learning how to be in love With every passing day The fireworks that fall about me Dance my breathe away And every time I try to grasp it, For ...

well, rewrite the words "it's" "other" "keeping up" and "competition" and you'll be fine. typos, i'm sure. i really liked this. it was actually sort of funny. and very true ...

I stripped the world naked And it’s clothes, Like 50 cent thrift shop rags, Drifted away Naked world It was like a side-street whore Willing now to fuck For less ...

i don't get the ending. is she pregnant? going to die from abuse? and i suggest you add more visions of this girl - it's a touching image and should ...

this was very cute. not deep, nor amazing...but most definitely cute. as for here: And if you don't like it, Well, that's you spin. this was unnessary and sort of ...

i didn't get this, but, then again, i don't know much about muhamed ali, so i suppose i should just fall back into silence. the rhythm wasn't dead or anything, ...

the stanzas didn't really tie into each other, but with the challenge of the poetic compusure, i cannot bring myself to critizise you. it did appear forced in some sections, ...

limericks! they should be applied in poetry far more often than they are, for they are beautiful compositions of strict rules and humorous...well...nonsense. i cannot also help but question the ...

actually, i enjoyed this. i didn't have any beautiful nonsense, it made sense and i loved the line breaks.

very cute. at first, it appeared random and meaningless and i though QRSTUV stood for something. but then, on reread, i saw how stupid i was.... anyway - it was ...

i liked the above a lot better. good good good.